St Pius X Moment in Time.

Name/ Francis

Date/17/9/2018.

Title/ The giant Celebration.

Learning Goal.

We are learning TO USE OUR SENSES to describe what happened from our point of view

We are learning to use WOW! words like adjectives and verbs to add impact for our audience (people who read our writing).

Draft 1.

I heard Telesia sing the entrance hymn in maori version while father was walking to the altar. I saw people singing and praising God’s name. I felt amazing because My school has been on for 60 years and normally other  school’s don’t last for 60 years I wondered if my school can last 100 years in the future.

Draft 2.

I heard Sateki,Silia,Angeline and Dianne sing responsorial psalm and they sounded incredible like an angel would sing the reason I think that is because they sang with the beat of the music and they kept in time with the beat. I saw father give out the eucharist and the people respectively waiting to get the eucharist because your suppose to do that. I felt kind of stupid I didn't come in my school uniform because everyone where’d there school uniform but me. But I didn’t come to school that’s why. I wondered if I was part of St Pius X school when I didn’t wear my school uniform.

Draft 3.

I heard a women shout women shout while we were honouring Huni Fifita and all the people said shhhhhh to the lady the said that to her because we were honouring Huni Fifita and who was the first tongans at St Pius X school and we were honouring him because he recently passed away. I saw a lot of Improvement performances and they showed how their cultures came to meet in St Pius X School I felt like if I wasn’t in St Pius X School I wouldn’t have a great 5 years of my life. I wondered if the woman who was shouting would say sorry and the people would not forgive her but I would forgive her.