I am a year 7 student in the Te Wairua Pakiki Learning Space at St. Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, New Zealand. My teachers are Mrs Tui and Miss Nees-Kairua.
Hi i am Eleanor from Grey Main School and i like the way you presented your writing next maybe put some photos in. Like the way you did it look forward to seeing more of your work Well done
Talofa Eleanor, I'm sorry for the late reply, I really appreciate your kind feedback! I will try next time to add some photos, just to give it some more excitement. Thank you though for your great feedback. - Francis
Hi i am Eleanor from Grey Main School and i like the way you presented your writing next maybe put some photos in. Like the way you did it look forward to seeing more of your work Well done
ReplyDeleteTalofa Eleanor, I'm sorry for the late reply, I really appreciate your kind feedback! I will try next time to add some photos, just to give it some more excitement.
DeleteThank you though for your great feedback.
- Francis